Review Detail of Xerxzey in The Creed of An Avenger

This story is quite well written in the sense of grammar and vocabulary used, A large issue I have with this story is, however, the fact that it is too alike with the original. Whether it is Cain or Hajime, the plotline evolves in the same way. Sure, while the fights and minor interactions are undoubtedly unique, major interactions such as the Behemoth fight, meeting Orcus and training the Haulias are the same. I would've liked it more if the author decided something like not training the Haulias and would eventually come to regret some of his decisions.