Review Detail of Saila in 100 years before Divorce

The story doesn't seem that bad, just like any other of the same genre, so not really that interesting if you read anything similar. But the grammar in the early chapters is poor and makes reading really uncomfortable, especialy lack of knowledge in using possessive pronouns that makes even the 1st page of the 1st chapter so confusing... Don't recommend unless it goes through some proofreading/editing or unless it gets really better later on.