hey author...saw this book in trial reads & picked it up..... i liked the synopsis & the storyline....i like that the main leads take their time in developing their feelings & how the characters are portrayed.... the one thing that i found off-putting was the quality of writing- there is definitely a better choice of words & phrases....
Snat
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LIKEHy Ann! I'm sorry for my lacking of choice of words and phrases. It might sound weird and weird since English is not my mother language. I tried to use Grammarly and improved as I wrote. It's my bad for not doing my IELTS practice seriously (Still reflecting on that). Thank you for liking my book anyway^^ I will greatly appreciate and accept grammar critics for my book. I'll wait for you at the paragraph comment. Luvs!
hey snat, thank you for replying. my mother tongue is not english either. & from what I read it looks like u are improving. this is just my suggestion, why not find an editor who can edit your work for you? keep up the good work & all the best for your ielts.
Snat:Hy Ann! I'm sorry for my lacking of choice of words and phrases. It might sound weird and weird since English is not my mother language. I tried to use Grammarly and improved as I wrote. It's my bad for not doing my IELTS practice seriously (Still reflecting on that). Thank you for liking my book anyway^^ I will greatly appreciate and accept grammar critics for my book. I'll wait for you at the paragraph comment. Luvs!
anndaniels:hey snat, thank you for replying. my mother tongue is not english either. & from what I read it looks like u are improving. this is just my suggestion, why not find an editor who can edit your work for you? keep up the good work & all the best for your ielts.