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The writing is too short than what I used to so it's a bit surprising it may also be the reason why it doesn't have a complete thought and have loopholes in it. It will will be better if it started with a flashback so you have a gist of what had happened.

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100 years before Divorce

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Thank you, I'll try my best to improve :)