Review Detail of Song_of_FieryIce in The Strongest Businessman: Becoming the Strongest through Business

This story takes a different approach from his previous version of the book. I originally just came here to know the difference of the current version and the past. But what I witnessed was the evolution of the author's writing style. His previous writing style was very MC based and all of the developments of the story revolved around him. This made his MC shine all through and the side characters become slightly bland in comparison. However, now, he seemed to have changed his perspective. He put more emphasis in emotion and the character development of the secondary characters and even the mob characters. They become more likeable and more vital to the story. The story has also featured more action that makes the story more exciting and entertaining. More characters are also being introduced which gives me the idea that the story will become more interactive The background of the MC has become more detailed and more logical which is contrast to the rushed backstory of the prologue. Just based on the current storyline, I can tell that the story will not be solely centered on the protagonists but also to the antagonist like how the author took the time to even craft Dale's backstory which made his character have more depth. I have great expectations for this story now. So, right now, I'm rating based on the potential. But I'll also be rating it in the future if it lived up to my expectations or not! Overall, I recommend this story for a read!