Review Detail of KillerKroc in The Strongest Businessman: Becoming the Strongest through Business

This story is presented in a very detailed manner. The dialogue is not awkward and the story flows smoothly. Just from the style of writing, info dumps are done in a way that it doesn't overload the reader. The protagonist is smart, aloof and ruthless which is sort of a stereotype but is still delivered rather freshly. The only flaw I could see is the slow update. But judging from other aspects, this story has great potential!