Review Detail of muraki in The Strongest Businessman: Becoming the Strongest through Business

Yes, it is indeed a rewrite. For your first question, Scarlet will still be taken by her clan after the Soaring Cloud Arc as cliche as it may sound. But it is vital for the story as Dylan would proceed to the clan to learn of Scarlet's past and secrets. The second event where Soaring Cloud will be destroyed will still happen. But there will be more interactions and progression in the first city compared to the old story. This time instead of just simply recruiting randomly. Dylan will be more selective in the subordinates he will have. Taking into account the betrayal of his brother, I thought that it would make much more sense if Dylan would be much more vigilant and distrusting to others. In this respect, I will also focus more on the characters emotional depth so that they would not be as bland and as flat as common stories would have. I would also iterate the fact that the 'other' Dylan also has lead a life before Dylan arrived at the other world. For the third question, I am thinking of removing this one to follo a different storyline. But I am still unsure how to proceed. There will be a lot more changes in the story as I don't just wish for it to be centered on the MC as I will try to tell the story of the other characters the further the story progresses. So, it would be better if you could discover it for yourself. Anyways, thank you for this review!