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selcouth
selcouthLv113yrselcouth

I’ve read the first five chapters and so far I am impressed by the authors grasp of the English language despite it not being their first, or second, spoken language. There are few minor grammatical errors here and there, but nothing glaringly obvious to the point that is distracts away from the overall story. The beginning introduction into the characters and their dynamics is insightful, and the author has a good understanding of showing rather than telling as the saying goes. I’ll have to provide an updated review once I’ve completely read through all available chapters, but so far, it is worth the read and I would recommend it if you are interested in the josei genre.

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xiaohai_23
xiaohai_23Authorxiaohai_23

Thank you for your review. You also helped me find another tag I haven't considered yet (josei), I'll add it to the story :) For the grammar, no matter how much I edit, I find mistakes when I re-read, and it always happens when I can't edit because I'm using a phone LOL

selcouth
selcouthLv11selcouth

If you click on your story in the create tab and publish, you can make edits to each individual chapter.

xiaohai_23:Thank you for your review. You also helped me find another tag I haven't considered yet (josei), I'll add it to the story :) For the grammar, no matter how much I edit, I find mistakes when I re-read, and it always happens when I can't edit because I'm using a phone LOL
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xiaohai_23Authorxiaohai_23

Ah, ok!

selcouth:If you click on your story in the create tab and publish, you can make edits to each individual chapter.