I don't like this type of story, when the ML gets the villainess pregnant, and still raises the kid without getting abortion and at the same time The FL is pregnant. I don't understand how the author thinks of stories like this. At first I thought the kid wasn't his, but it stated the villainess/cannon fodder saved his sperm in a container. The Female lead/FL had a son and the villainess had a daughter. And the ML /male lead is the cousin of the villainess so theres a taboo there. I advise future readers not to read this.
Minom
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LIKESome of these aspects are just personal opinion. Yes, sometimes I thought, "oh my gosh. Well, THAT'S weird." But hey- that is why YOU are the author. I will say that while farfetched or 'cringy' it was a creative way to accomplish the plot without making the ML into a villain. Honestly, if NOT written as such, there would have been many more holes. While taking into account the audiences opinion, remember not every story can appeal to everyone, in every way. Thanks for the read!
Minom:Thanks for the reviews! I tried to make a different kind of story, hence the plot is kind of unforgivable. I will keep in mind for the future reference new story of your suggestion.