Great story! Your english isnt to bad, the story is still comprehensible and really good. Also I'm not entirely sure what the characters look like other than hair color, a little more in depth description would be nice. Keep up the good work! Cant wait for more!
BluePen
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LIKEBluePen:Thank you very much for the review. It means a lot to me and It keeps me motivated. Also, I will make sure to focus more on the descriptions.