Review Detail of perseusd24 in The 7 deadly sins...Demon Lord's daughter?

Item: The 7 deadly sins...Demon Lord's daughter?
Rating: 3.6

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perseusd24Lv44yrperseusd24

Good book, very entertaining but you should just work on your character dialogue as they seem kind of forced but not all. Anyway just good luck

Shreya_loves_choco

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Shreya_loves_chocoAuthorShreya_loves_choco

Thnks..I'll surely work on that..😅 It usually happens when I'm in a rush to update or not in a very mood to write..😋

4yr

Shreya_loves_chocoAuthorShreya_loves_choco

Um... Could you please tell me which parts has this polroblem ? 😉 I would do my best to improve if I knew that or maybe even edit those parts. 😅

4yr