Review Detail of oab in The Hyuga Gamer

Item: The Hyuga Gamer
Rating: 4.2

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I would like this story more if she/he overcome her crush on Naruto in the near future... yes, he is influenced by her character, but she is also influenced by his! as much as I like fanfics about Naruto world... I don’t like THE Naruto (character), he is basically useless. He mainly only uses two jutsu’s! TWO!!! Or rather two and a half... 2,5! (variants of the rasengan). And her/his presence on team 7 would and should make ripple/butterfly effect on the story! (If she really will be part of that team) I really like the OC-Hinata idea, but it really should bring major differences to the story... well not if the OC character is working in the background/shadows and only take an active role in the 4th war... Also the idea that an OC is close with Naruto isn’t very original anymore... it is really overused in fanfics... In the stories about an OC in naruto world it is the OC who should be the centre of the story, but for some reason many authors basically make the OC an sidekick of Naruto and it’s more about the OC helping in improving Naruto (character) than the OC! Obviously the OC are also super strong but it is still mostly about “helping naruto” thing in the end... I really hope this story won’t be like that... but I can already feel it will... 😕

The Hyuga Gamer

Trash1326

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thanks for your thoughts and yes if you stick to this fanfict you should see some changed you desire because hinata’s not going to be a minor sidekick i can tell you that for sure tho

3yr

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So a major sidekick? 🤔 hahah I am planning to keep reading your story, it’s only the 4th character after all . I’m not that quick to disregard a story with a lot of potential. But how long I’m going to read it... that depends... Because I really don’t like when OC’s are too close with Naruto, don’t like him, like I don’t like Harry Potter (character) in HP books (plot of the story also sucks, too many plot holes, I blame Rowling poor writing). Both worlds (Naruto and HP) have a lot of potential, but were in the end ruined by their original creators/authors, that’s why I like the fanfics. I generally don’t leave negative comments/reviews, because if I don’t like a story, I just stop reading it. Authors can’t please every single person after all.

Trash1326: thanks for your thoughts and yes if you stick to this fanfict you should see some changed you desire because hinata’s not going to be a minor sidekick i can tell you that for sure tho

3yr