Author here.to me my story is bad but not that bad because maybe the reason I feel it not that good is because I'm the author himself I guess.I hope people like it more than I do because what can I say I feel cringe when I read a story that I wrote myself
M_Otaku
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LIKEHahahaha. Dude the mc barely did anything yet. To me the 10 chapter feel like it's only around 3 chapter only. If not for the fact that I'm a bit busy I would write more. Thanks for the support anyway (^∆^)
Pooloopo_Op:your story is good it just needs a main plot like add missions to the system for him to do