Review Detail of Daoist451130 in Rising of the divine stone cultivation tablet

Imma be honest the stories alright, not too shabby but like it could rlly be better. I just think you could do better, so hopefully this review will give you some good ideas, but either way, explain cultivation better, I don't get it too much and it'll really help. give him a more unique character and maybe write a little better. Anyways, thanks for the story!