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mrCat
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I am no pro, so no need to take my words seriously. the story progress is slow, not that slow but it's slow so keeping a steady read from the beginning is really hard. overall, the story is good and the development is also good, it's a good novel but with slow progress. Perfect for those who likes to read novel which has everything explained in detail. it's a good novel, though the slow progress can be you know... still, it's a good novel you should try it.

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Remnant: A Battle Within

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Woah, you think it's slow too, I think it's slow too, ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… so I'm adding some action scenes on it to at least make it a bit more interesting ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… (although I'm not really good at writing one)

mrCat
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I just told you my honest thoughts that will help you improve... dont worry, u are doing good. u are improving

bluerabyss:Woah, you think it's slow too, I think it's slow too, ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… so I'm adding some action scenes on it to at least make it a bit more interesting ๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜…๐Ÿ˜… (although I'm not really good at writing one)
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Thank you so much!!! ๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š๐Ÿ˜Š

mrCat:I just told you my honest thoughts that will help you improve... dont worry, u are doing good. u are improving