I am no pro, so no need to take my words seriously. the story progress is slow, not that slow but it's slow so keeping a steady read from the beginning is really hard. overall, the story is good and the development is also good, it's a good novel but with slow progress. Perfect for those who likes to read novel which has everything explained in detail. it's a good novel, though the slow progress can be you know... still, it's a good novel you should try it.
bluerabyss
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LIKEI just told you my honest thoughts that will help you improve... dont worry, u are doing good. u are improving
bluerabyss:Woah, you think it's slow too, I think it's slow too, ๐ ๐ ๐ so I'm adding some action scenes on it to at least make it a bit more interesting ๐ ๐ ๐ (although I'm not really good at writing one)
mrCat:I just told you my honest thoughts that will help you improve... dont worry, u are doing good. u are improving