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mrCat
mrCatLv33yr
2021-02-19 23:19

I am no pro, so no need to take my words seriously. the story progress is slow, not that slow but it's slow so keeping a steady read from the beginning is really hard. overall, the story is good and the development is also good, it's a good novel but with slow progress. Perfect for those who likes to read novel which has everything explained in detail. it's a good novel, though the slow progress can be you know... still, it's a good novel you should try it.

Remnant: A Battle Within

bluerabyss
4.8
280 Chs

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bluerabyssAuthor

Woah, you think it's slow too, I think it's slow too, πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… so I'm adding some action scenes on it to at least make it a bit more interesting πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… (although I'm not really good at writing one)

3yr
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mrCat
mrCatLv3

I just told you my honest thoughts that will help you improve... dont worry, u are doing good. u are improving

bluerabyss:Woah, you think it's slow too, I think it's slow too, πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… so I'm adding some action scenes on it to at least make it a bit more interesting πŸ˜…πŸ˜…πŸ˜… (although I'm not really good at writing one)
3yr
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bluerabyss
bluerabyssAuthor

Thank you so much!!! 😊😊😊

mrCat:I just told you my honest thoughts that will help you improve... dont worry, u are doing good. u are improving
3yr
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Hi, I'm your author, humbly rating my own novel. I gave it 5 stars well since it's my book πŸ˜…πŸ˜…. I hope you are all liking this story. Don't be shy to rate this story too! Because I'm dying to know what you think of it. I'm apologizing early for all grammatical error that might appear on the chapters, I'll get back to them as soon as I can.

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I honestly give a five but if people like novels with no errors what so ever there are a few instences of incorrect pronoun use like he she him her. Im half asleep typing this just read to locked chapter from first. I was not expecting that partial twist. Said twist isnt even fully explaned yet in my current chapter read ill add comments to this review if anything interesting happens once i start on the locked chapters. which will be awhile maybe at one each week or tWo if i get greedy. o7 see yall in the chapter comments and such.

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An interesting Story! I haven't much yet so this review won't be a help for now but I assure u that I'll give another review later on. I like the overall writing and story plot. The characters are also well designed. Keep up the good work! Full support to u author! [img=recommend][img=recommend]

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