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Jlairu
JlairuLv114yr
2020-08-12 13:22

Its a fine novel to pass the time.BUT. There are issues. Spelling mistakes are atrocius, grammatical errors too. Character design, not terrible (I've seen far worse), just plain. Story development is OK. World background, non-existent. Most things this novel can change therefore authenticity of this review, may become invalid. As of now take my word for it.

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Jlairu
JlairuLv11

I wrote this under the assumption this was ongoing. Apparently it isnt. So its Trash.

RaijinInu
RaijinInuAuthor

Like mentions in most on my works, there is an order in how to read these, maybe you could try reading The Captial of Dungeons while you're at it. The entirety of my work are centered around a world called "Arganthes" and if those reading it would like to have more development and background I strongly recommend reading the rest of my works in the following order. - Arganthes: The Capital of Dungeons Vol. 1 - What?! I Reincarnated As A Lizard?! Or - Arganthes: The World Tree, as they take place at the same time. And later after continuing my works there will be more joining the collection and expanding the series as a whole. As for the grammatical errors, I have to check back on them. Since I have been writing everything on my phone. I want to apologise for the inconvenience and incorrect usage of grammar, pronounce and verbs as I do agree they can be quite atrocious at times Thank you for you review, I greatly appreciate it ^^.

RaijinInu
RaijinInuAuthor

And of course, I'll take your word for it and take this all as a learning experience ^^

RaijinInu
RaijinInuAuthor

Having more projects to work on makes it quite difficult to keep everything up to date, I have promised my loyal readers that I'll continue once The World Tree has caught up with What?! I Reincarnated As A Lizard?!

Jlairu:I wrote this under the assumption this was ongoing. Apparently it isnt. So its Trash.
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