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the author has serious skill not many have on writing with attention to detail it's the mark of a great writer I would know. I can feel and see in the story itself in those little moments. very good story would love to see more charecter development but still excellent altogether, storyline was a bit vague and flitting but to be expected in a shorter story but non the less interesting. good read.
The Mating Game
Khlionie93
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Oh well I can't wait to see your progression please keep writing! As a fellow writer I know how hard it is but it is definitely worth it! For so young you had alot of talent, not many can make a story come to life In another's mind but you do have that gift! I will be looking for more of your story's in the future.
Khlionie93:This was written years ago when i was 19! Im now 27 and have come a long way I hope to publish More Here in the coming months! Thank you for the kinD words!
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