Review Detail of BaeVida in [QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS
Review detail
Alright, the move is nice. Your normal system novel and subsided missions. The twist in it is that the MC has to protect and help the villainess while still being close friends of the female lead. Well the villainess herself ain't bad, just a victim of family standards. Then the stupid annoying ball system, that likes to give our MC a headache. My only problem with this book is the grammatical errors. Not much but it should be checked, almost all writers have that. And the update stability, stop being lazy with anime author and write. U would give ur readers an update starvation. Not nice. Anyway nice work, keep it up. Ohh FYI, I think there is future Yuri.
[QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS
Carciphones_02
Liked by 3 people
LIKEReplies12
Unfortunately I can't. Its b4 posting u can. Oh and for long paragraphs try shortening them. A advice from a writer friend to me, was btw 3-5 lines. Advanced writers thought him that.
Carciphones_02:Thank you for the review!!!! I will check the mistake and keep it in mind about your advice!!!!(☞ﾟ∀ﾟ)☞ Also... Can you put the spoiler tag?? There's a lot in your review.. ಥ‿ಥ
BaeVida:Unfortunately I can't. Its b4 posting u can. Oh and for long paragraphs try shortening them. A advice from a writer friend to me, was btw 3-5 lines. Advanced writers thought him that.
BaeVida:Unfortunately I can't. Its b4 posting u can. Oh and for long paragraphs try shortening them. A advice from a writer friend to me, was btw 3-5 lines. Advanced writers thought him that.
Carciphones_02:(つ✧ω✧)つ this is cute!!!!! Or.. do you want this abomination??? 👁️👃👁️. ☜ (☜^o^) 👄
Carciphones_02:I do have discord but, I'm still a new user so, I don't know how to use it. ╰(⸝⸝⸝´꒳`⸝⸝⸝)╯