Review Detail of Snowin in [QT] SAVE THE VILLAINESS : SYSTEM IN PROGRESS

Okay, so the first chapter/prologue is very well written. It catches my attention and leaves me thinking "Hmmm.. What's going to happen." I personally don't like system type novels, mainly because I think they are all the same and leave no uniqueness between the other. However, the interactions between the main character and the robot made me want to keep reading more, and more, and more. It was funny, entertaining, and interesting. It really showed the personalities of both, (if a robot can have a personality haha) As far as the writing: Overall pretty good, very minimal grammatical errors, but English isn't my first language either, so reading through this gave no problems what so ever. The only thing I might add is I would love to see some more scene/environment descriptions. There were parts where I understood what was happening, but I had no picture in my head of what I'm looking at. Once again, take all of this from an *******'s opinion, (Me) So I'm just giving my personal thoughts. All in all, great stuff, you got me on board!