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amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv44yr
2020-01-10 04:42

Long ass chps [hopefully will continue]..legible,,,,good grammar and most importantly its interesting...look all I am just saying is only allow MC to have kagune [plus maybe some BS ability..idk..blood manipulation?---why he is the MC]...only allow MC to have ghoul ability because when others have its boring...Also since MC is tortured make him some what dark...ie: he kills evil shits...also maybe make MC not like midoriya....[why? Mido wants to be a hero but cant even stand up for himself..also some bakugo bash...look I just want some bash..why..eh..I'm bored] Suggestion: give the some love just built the romance no dxd style BS...keep harem small pls

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Jokr_Avenger
Jokr_AvengerAuthor

-Mc will be a Ghoul so I want to focus on him who knows Kaneki in the final form knows which Overpower he is, the harem won't be big a 4 and will have other couples in the class and Mc won't get too involved in the personal dramas from people so much that he has his Ghoul side to control and the chapters will always average 2000 words.

DragonkingKyo
DragonkingKyoLv6

aww I was hoping for a big harem(who are the harem members?(hope Momo and Himiko are in the harem))

Jokr_Avenger:-Mc will be a Ghoul so I want to focus on him who knows Kaneki in the final form knows which Overpower he is, the harem won't be big a 4 and will have other couples in the class and Mc won't get too involved in the personal dramas from people so much that he has his Ghoul side to control and the chapters will always average 2000 words.
Jokr_Avenger
Jokr_AvengerAuthor

-well, I think himiko is a very suitable partner for Mc and as for the others it will be rambling and there won't be many, I want to leave other couples of characters

DragonkingKyo:aww I was hoping for a big harem(who are the harem members?(hope Momo and Himiko are in the harem))
amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

mellisa???

Jokr_Avenger:-well, I think himiko is a very suitable partner for Mc and as for the others it will be rambling and there won't be many, I want to leave other couples of characters
TheFlagGuy
TheFlagGuyLv4

Have not read your story yet so I am not sure how far you have gotten with the harem. I dont remember seeing this girl in the anime but I think she would make a good harem member. She has kitsune quirk (9-tails, fox ears, and fox form). Nothing listed as her personality but I feel like she would be a bit more... animalistic I guess. Would go well with him. https://my-hero-academia-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/Mo_Xie

Jokr_Avenger:-well, I think himiko is a very suitable partner for Mc and as for the others it will be rambling and there won't be many, I want to leave other couples of characters
Jokr_Avenger
Jokr_AvengerAuthor

-Oh sorry for the delay, but this character is fanon, basically created by fans

TheFlagGuy:Have not read your story yet so I am not sure how far you have gotten with the harem. I dont remember seeing this girl in the anime but I think she would make a good harem member. She has kitsune quirk (9-tails, fox ears, and fox form). Nothing listed as her personality but I feel like she would be a bit more... animalistic I guess. Would go well with him. https://my-hero-academia-fanon.fandom.com/wiki/Mo_Xie
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DarthVegito
DarthVegitoLv10

This story does not have good grammar...... first 4 chapters in and its obvious... maybe it gets better thats why you said it was good? Hope so

amaturewriter
amaturewriterLv4

sorry my dude...forgot about this bk.

DarthVegito:This story does not have good grammar...... first 4 chapters in and its obvious... maybe it gets better thats why you said it was good? Hope so
Jokr_Avenger
Jokr_AvengerAuthor

-Um, I started it a year ago, I don't remember how I did what I can do is rewrite

DarthVegito:This story does not have good grammar...... first 4 chapters in and its obvious... maybe it gets better thats why you said it was good? Hope so
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