Review Detail of Ichiya_Vandalay in Yami : The Gamer Kage {Complete}

Good story. MC isn't op and ruthless in the beginning, which was a breath of fresh air considering all the op MC kills everyone fanfics I read. The ending was bad; it felt rushed and forced. I was hoping for the MC to start his own clan. It was hinted by Hiruzen that he has the potential to start his own clan. And what was weird was that he forgot his custom teammates. Like what happened to China and Zaku and Ko after the chunin exam. They were never mentioned. It was like they never existed. The author didn't talk about them or at least hint at what happened to them. It is a solid book with long chapters, which makes it better. So 4.4 overall. If you like fanfics where the MC has real character development, then this is a must read