Review Detail of Donovan_Jeppesen in Yami : The Gamer Kage {Complete}

The occasional sentence where you have to stop and think what was supposed to be, but other than those this is perfectly readable. MC Yami has clear motivations and how he thinks even if he occasionally goes stupid. I would say he was well written. The world building heavily piggybacks on the Naruto world as you would expect from a fanfic. However, the new element that are added are poorly explored and unsatisfactory. Dungeons, only goes to one. I assume there is one in all 5 villages since he could start in any of them. Only visits the one in Konoha. Probably had the opportunity to visit the mist one when they where there. Gains the ability to travel to other worlds. Never uses it. Ending, reveled that everything was just a game. Walks out of vr arcade with irl gf and the arcade disappears and gf doesn’t remember it. Is stated that there are a lot of vr arcades so don’t really know why this one is that special besides…. It is hinted at him still having his rennegan, but it ends right after and doesn’t seem like this will continue. It is a decent fanfic where MC makes some major changes to the story and it explains how it effects sasuke but everyone else besides those he kills or saves change. Many of the unique elements are under explored and a “it was just a dream ending”