this is a very interesting story, the first part made me actually think there will be some hot steamy scenes which made me let out a nervous laugh hahaha jokes aside. there is still a lot more to improve but you did well writing this story. You did a nice job writing the character's emotions and everything. It's very interesting and you have a lot of potentials and I'm looking forward to seeing more! Adding this to my library! I love this! Keep writing Author!
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