It's good but it could be better, I honestly look forward to seeing the story unfold along with the characters and I can see that Phyrra will go with Jaune (I expected her to fall in love with Jack)
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LIKEWell nothing is settle yet , I hope you like it and change the review eventually, Pyrrha is infatuated with Jaune cause of his hard working persona to improve himself , the ship I have in mind is a secret but the rest whatever you didn’t like I hope I managed to improve it to make your review a 5 or 4 star review.