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Cloudsheep
CloudsheepLv103yrCloudsheep

Ok so basically im really disappointed with this novel though im gonna make it a three star because of the sheer effort the author has put into writing this like the ridiculous amounts of chapters this book has plus each chapter is not half-assed it is quite long probably 4000+ words anyway heres why its a three star for me do note that im dropping this without getting far yet in the story so some of my assumptions may be wrong: Hollow characters: Every character you encounter in this story feels extremely simple and predictable to the point where you can almost tell what theyre going to say even before they say it Cliché dialogue: You will litterally see Lines from this book that are taken straight out of a cultivation manhua. stuff like; IMPOSSIBLE HOW CAN THIS TRASH DODGE MY ULTRA MEGA HYPER PLANET OBLITERATION BEAM!!!!! and NOT BAD FOR A LOWLY BEING BUT YOUR LIFE WILL END HERE!!! kinda stuff so on and so forth which makes me want to not read every line said by that character Obvious References:i get that you take inspiration from novels similar to this one but dude cmon the parallels are too obvious to the point where it becomes an amalgamation of Kumo Nani Desuga, Re: monster and Chrisalis its like you took the three books, threw them in a cauldron, took a whole sheet of paper with the ideas you came up with, then mashed them together to make this book. the parallel personality is straight outta kumo nani desuga the concept of taking wives is once again taken out of Re monster Classes? System? Stamina?from Chrisalis like dude CMON MAN YOU JUST TOOK IT FROM THE THREE NO ALTERATION NO ORIGINAL IDEA IM AM EXTREMELY FRUSTRATED WITH YOU DUDDD MAAAAAN AAAAAAAAAAAA OH YEAH THE SEVEN SINS???? LIKE LUST AND WHAT NOT IS ALSO FROM KUMO im not even. anyway i have a lot more to say but im kinda lazy so im just gonna leave this one halfway its not like anyone's gonna read it anyway im just venting out my frustration towards the author in this review like so much wasted potential AAAAHHHHH. author if ur reading this im sorry i left your hard work a three star but i have valid reasons that is all peace. ngl doe i admire the hard work you put in this one

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Epic of Caterpillar

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Cloudsheep
CloudsheepLv10Cloudsheep

so question 1: which books did you take inspiration from (although i have some guesses id still want to know) question 2: since when did you start writing this book cause dang its pretty long question 3: do you do this as a hobby or are you doing this as a career 4: do you get paid in this website? (iive always been curious bout this one) 5: how much do you get paid

PancakesWitch
PancakesWitchAuthorPancakesWitch

As I read this review I feel like i am slowly havig my brain melt, please look for some psychological help

Cloudsheep
CloudsheepLv10Cloudsheep

SO YOU DID READ IT!! aight i got some questions for you author-san are ok with me asking? its fine if you dont want to its just me satiating my curiosity

PancakesWitch:As I read this review I feel like i am slowly havig my brain melt, please look for some psychological help
Cloudsheep
CloudsheepLv10Cloudsheep

im sorry if its a bit personal. you do have the option to not answer anything though id really love a response