Review Detail of MadAuthor in Epic of Caterpillar
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overall the book is good,the MC is interesting and the best thing about him is that he embrace the fact that he or rather she is now a monster and also a women unlike most mcs who pathetically and hypothetically try to behave like a human,side characters can sometimes be interesting, the power system is way to overwhelming,Mc will constantly be showered with skill that even one of them would make some one a Mc thus taking away any meaning or significant about skills to the point that i just skip them because whats the point getting familiar with a skill when one more powerful soon will be added,the other thing that really annoyed me was the fact that many thing happened to the mc and many power were given to her that she have no reason of having, just because she is the Mc all the laws of the world would be bend to her will???? WTF not just powers many people who were after her head would suddenly change and became her admirers???for what goddammn reason???and also romance and harem are also incredibly messy, it is what a horny teenager would come up with,so i tack back what i said in the beginning the book is NOT good, the best it could ever be is some book that you read because you are bored AF and have nothing else to read and after reading you would forget almost everything about the book
Epic of Caterpillar
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i read the book till the end or at least latest chapter, some of the problems i mention have been solved but new one has arrived,you some times overexplain things which except a certain group of readers would annoye others,the harm thing and sudden change in character is still the same,it can be explained by the fact she is the sin of lust thus people would drop their guard around her easier,but it still annoying,one thing that was good and keep getting better was mcs ability to adapt to being monster and a woman(the breastfeeding part and pregnancy part was an amazing character development, well done 👏 ) and one thing that annoyed me but get a little bit better was power system,my suggestion is if you are planning to down the road you are currently going ,then go batshit crazy with the new power ups,even more over the top than what is currently is,embrace craziness in power system just like how you did it mc,one new thing you did and i actually enjoyed was the dream sequences and the whole dream world and the dream god(his name was bill if i am not mistaken )this part were very brilliant and have a huge potential if you use them currently they can change the entire book,for example you can use them to explore alternatives,for example what would have happened if she was a snake ,or what would have happened if she was a human , ext
PancakesWitch:Youre probably in the very first chapters, its get better. You can read my second novel to see how much ive improved as an author... or not 😉
Yeah I see the many possibilities there, but i got a lot to do firdt with the many events setting up. And your ideas are pretty good, thanks. Her charm changed more later with the Enlightenment Classes, and instead of simply charming she gives power and inspirations (in fields such as alchemy, technology, gastronomy, etc), so it becomes something else than 'brainwashing' but it could also be considered something similar, im making her more thoughtful of everything now and she isnt as baselessly evil as before, and is more like a chaotic neutral opportunist, such change can be seen when she forgave Agatheina and other things in later stages (privilege has 35 chapters where a lot happens)
MadAuthor:i read the book till the end or at least latest chapter, some of the problems i mention have been solved but new one has arrived,you some times overexplain things which except a certain group of readers would annoye others,the harm thing and sudden change in character is still the same,it can be explained by the fact she is the sin of lust thus people would drop their guard around her easier,but it still annoying,one thing that was good and keep getting better was mcs ability to adapt to being monster and a woman(the breastfeeding part and pregnancy part was an amazing character development, well done 👏 ) and one thing that annoyed me but get a little bit better was power system,my suggestion is if you are planning to down the road you are currently going ,then go batshit crazy with the new power ups,even more over the top than what is currently is,embrace craziness in power system just like how you did it mc,one new thing you did and i actually enjoyed was the dream sequences and the whole dream world and the dream god(his name was bill if i am not mistaken )this part were very brilliant and have a huge potential if you use them currently they can change the entire book,for example you can use them to explore alternatives,for example what would have happened if she was a snake ,or what would have happened if she was a human , ext