Review Detail of Marramane in Angel's Song: Requiem of the Dreams

i love this story, first of all it is a rare opportunity to see how the natives of a world would possibly react when "players" suddenly appeear in their world, the grammar quality is really high and in my opinion the world building is skillfully done and there is enough development to keep one interested but not overwhelming. aside from some of the minor "player" character the Char, design is well done leaving me wanting for more. (read over on the authors website (pdf))