Review Detail of catvi in THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER
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Impossible to read. This author for some WEIRD INCOMPREHENSIBLE REASON uses no Full stops/periods. The grammar looks good HOWEVER, you don't know where the sentences end. Impossible to tell.
THE SUMMONED MONSTER THAT IS SUMMONING ANOTHER MONSTER
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It made the story LITERALLY unreadable. What do you mean by "Only"? Fullstops are how you know where sentences end. Without it, even a masterpiece is only unreadable gibberish. It deserves 0 stars. But thats not an option
MrTotoro:if the only bad thing was that, why did you gave him 1 and a half star?
catvi:It made the story LITERALLY unreadable. What do you mean by "Only"? Fullstops are how you know where sentences end. Without it, even a masterpiece is only unreadable gibberish. It deserves 0 stars. But thats not an option
That’s not all. IT wasn’t just the full stops. The grammar itself is bad. From the title and synopsis alone, you can tell the author is quite bad at English. When i boot up Webnovel, i expect a novel to be readable. Webnovel is not a website to train your writing skills, it’s a website for people of all kinds of walks to read books...readable books. If you can’t even provide a readable book, you shouldn’t be posting your book for public audiences.
knijn:if you cant read without a fuckin . you really need to go back to grade school
oh yeah the grammar was horrible but the little idiot was complaining about full stops and if that's the only problem it's not a problem... oh and idk for how long you've been reading but webnovel is imo the worst site to read books
P1zaBox:That’s not all. IT wasn’t just the full stops. The grammar itself is bad. From the title and synopsis alone, you can tell the author is quite bad at English. When i boot up Webnovel, i expect a novel to be readable. Webnovel is not a website to train your writing skills, it’s a website for people of all kinds of walks to read books...readable books. If you can’t even provide a readable book, you shouldn’t be posting your book for public audiences.
Understandable. I only really use webnovel because i cant be bothered to find another site lol. Still, it is possible to find some hidden gems if you look hard enough.
knijn:oh yeah the grammar was horrible but the little idiot was complaining about full stops and if that's the only problem it's not a problem... oh and idk for how long you've been reading but webnovel is imo the worst site to read books
P1zaBox:Understandable. I only really use webnovel because i cant be bothered to find another site lol. Still, it is possible to find some hidden gems if you look hard enough.
Punctuation marks are pretty significant to a book/novel, it helps the readers to better understand where it begins, where it ends, how it progresses, understanding of certain phrases, and etc. An old yet accurate example would be: I LOVE HER PERIOD/I LOVE HER, PERIOD. Depending on the context, the use of punctuation mark makes it easily understandable what the writer/author is trying to say to the readers. In the former, it refers to a character who has a particular fetish or belief towards menstruation, and in the latter- it refers to a character showing their love to a woman. I would understand if the reason this author does not use any punctuation mark is simply because English is not their mother tongue, is not fully taught in regards to English writing, or only writes and posts drafts without any editing.
knijn:if you cant read without a fuckin . you really need to go back to grade school
yes but it wouldn't ruin an amazing novel and the dude even used capital letters (while his grammar is so bad it's unreadable) just not having a . At the end isn't that bad
Mad_Tea_Debauchery:Punctuation marks are pretty significant to a book/novel, it helps the readers to better understand where it begins, where it ends, how it progresses, understanding of certain phrases, and etc. An old yet accurate example would be: I LOVE HER PERIOD/I LOVE HER, PERIOD. Depending on the context, the use of punctuation mark makes it easily understandable what the writer/author is trying to say to the readers. In the former, it refers to a character who has a particular fetish or belief towards menstruation, and in the latter- it refers to a character showing their love to a woman. I would understand if the reason this author does not use any punctuation mark is simply because English is not their mother tongue, is not fully taught in regards to English writing, or only writes and posts drafts without any editing.
It wouldn't ruin the novel *by itself*, yes. But at the end of the day, in order for the author to accurately convey what they want for the readers to understand, one of the things they would have to use would be punctuation marks. Do note that: The idea for a novel/book could be amazing But those little significant details such as this, will affect how the novel/book is perceived. If ya'll enjoyed it nonetheless, I don't mind- you do you man. But that joy could've been shared with more people if you truly minded your written work. But as I said, there are circumstances, so I will empathize with the author on that part.
knijn:yes but it wouldn't ruin an amazing novel and the dude even used capital letters (while his grammar is so bad it's unreadable) just not having a . At the end isn't that bad
If you don't think Grammer and punctuation are essential for a novel try this: Go look an mtl of you favorite novel at the moment and try to read it and let me know what you think :).
knijn:yes but it wouldn't ruin an amazing novel and the dude even used capital letters (while his grammar is so bad it's unreadable) just not having a . At the end isn't that bad
If you like video game/summoner novels and do not mind op mc with MAD luck, Omega Summoner by XiaoKongxu has been well worth my time. Some minor grammar errors that are completely able to be ignored if you aren't "a little bisch"😋. Love the plot and the author noticeably pays attention to their readers. It is the only novel I have found so far (specifically on this site) In the few moths that I've been using webnovel that made me want a membership right when I used my last fp.
knijn:yeah but you have to search for so long (you have any recommendations?)
bitch can you read what is written here i said grammer is important but punctuation doesn't matter as much
Omnidoa:If you don't think Grammer and punctuation are essential for a novel try this: Go look an mtl of you favorite novel at the moment and try to read it and let me know what you think :).
knijn:bitch can you read what is written here i said grammer is important but punctuation doesn't matter as much