Review Detail of Azure_Sky in The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe

Writing Quality is okay. Stability of updates is poor so far. You may be busy, but if you want to establish your novel updates stability should be good. Story development is so far progressing really good. I hope that you will re-write the chapter 2 and 3 like chapter 1. Character design is not complete yet. So I am hoping you have something great in your mind. As for world background, you gave a hint. It will be an elvish world. I love Elf related novels and movies. I will keep your novel in check. I hope you will be able to give us a big surprise.