Review Detail of Slewis in The Indomitable Mage, Ruler of The Universe

Your first chapter started off kinda slow, but I really started to pick up after chapter two. As for your character development, I would have to say that you do a really great job with the way you put a lot of depth to the MC. The only real drawback is the update frequency but that could be due to private matters or you're just busy. Which doesn't take away from your novel at all. All in all its a great novel with a ton of potential, I can't wait to read more!