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ZAHID_HASANLv55yr
2020-01-04 15:15

i like the way its going and not the violent and not too much change. it would be even more good that mc dont try to take others girlfriend. most of the fanfic make a mc too much op and always have lots of women. if mc grow with time and not like im already strongest that would be great. if there is any harem then it should be three to four if there is more it be too much of a hassle. i hope it become great and not just pause at 20 to 30 pages. And thanks im liking yours chapters.

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oh thank god a person of culture....indeed..wise comments

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