Review Detail of Harem_fan in Fear the Father

Keep in mind this is of chap 5.........Well to start when I saw the first 2 chaps I thought I was reading a funny azz comedy. will I was horribly wrong from chap 3 to 5 it was a day in the life of a serial killer. I will give the story a bit more time to develop but just be warned.........Ill change my review if there are any real changes. Ps not bad for a starting writer.