Review Detail of Jay_II in Monstrous Path

In the beginning the writing is superb, but starting around chapter 35, it goes downhill and is quite uncomfortable to read. There are misspellings, missing words, wrong words, and a ridiculous amount of (brackets). From previous comments I surmised that it’s update schedule was really stable, but in the last two months it has been unpredictable. The plot is captivating, but has a few clichés. Thankfully most are treated in an interesting way. The main character is very smart, and acts intelligently at almost all times. This is not a dumb MC. I repeat, this is not a dumb MC. He grows and his relationships with others are well thought out. Forty chapters in, yet I am still confused about the setting. While reading I have gone from medieval to futuristic, and most things in between. Right now I think it is a standard sword and sorcery world with a little electricity, a global peacekeeping organization that gives everybody magic identity rings, and ridiculously good, well funded citizen care organizations.