Item: Adam Black The Grand Sorcerer
Rating: 3.6
Author: DragonGodSmith3000

DragonGodSmith3000Lv145yr

2020-01-18 04:38

I really like this story as it’s a intriguing take in always up for a combo of wizarding world and marvel I still think it fits better in dc but marvel does have the whole secrecy and silence anyone who knows going on. Anyways the story is intriguing simply because the mc himself may or may not be related to Loki and has many hidden abilities and talents yet to be seen I would like to see the author step out of the shadow of the beautiful rose potter whom he is besmirched and overprotective of due to her background and tragic destiny. This does not excuse the rapid personality shift rose is going through or her always hitting or pulling on the Mcs ear when annoyed. This is not a quality a abuse victim of physical and verbal abuse will show along with neglect and low self esteem issues will show or do, we also have yet to see any improvement on her malnourished state if so it’s not talked about. I understand the author is translating is words into English but the short chapters and regurgitating the original books gets kinda annoying. I am not bashing this book I believe in time this can be a hidden gem of the author doesn’t drop like so many do on this site due to negative feedback and harassment. I wish you luck on a interesting book that I look forward to seeing epic fights and exploration.

Adam Black The Grand Sorcerer

Imabethatguy12345

4.0

113 Chs

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BrezerLv14

First its not a bad try. This round drako has a brother that's a good guy not a little **** which is the mc. Ron is in this but not part of the main group and the author makes him out to be more of a pos than I have seen in other stories. There is no HP in this one. HP is a girl called Rose and she is in ravenclaw with the mc and she likes the mc also. Ok that was the ok part. The spelling in this story is terrible,. I find myself at times trying figure out what language this is because of the terrible spelling. The author needs to stop adding chapters and go back and fix the atrocious spelling before adding more chapters. Really man grammarly has a free version and you can spell check. The story is passable but the spelling brings it way down.

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Imabethatguy12345Author

well, why not. My story isn't the best but its something that I love to write. if you read the story please help me in correcting my spellings. I appreciate Nessasary criticism, but I hate it when you criticize unnecessarily or criticize when the answer is in the story. Enjoy my book but if you don't like It you can just Drop. Thanks for your support.

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OreZarkLv5

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