Review Detail of Jozan in Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

It's a nice read especially when you use the audio feature (which many people don't know exists, for some reason) But the author needs an editor, proofreader or just do it themselves. personally, I use Grammarly along with a read aloud app so I can edit while I listen to the story being read to me. YOU NEED THIS! especially for the first few chapters. I'm not perfect either but I try to minimise the grammar errors because it's one of the major turnoffs in a story. I like the story concept as well. * If anyone's interested in giving my novel "The Epic Adventures of Maou and Shelly" a read (I promise it's good. use the audio feature if you have it.)