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Review Detail of Vick_Tor in Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

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First thing first, I stopped reading at chap18 so I don't know how thing go beyond that. The story is interesting, whith the charactere reincarnated as a ring and the MC get dragged left and right. While the writing isn't that bad, it's not good either but you can understand the story without issues. The world background has yet to be developped (maybe later? I stopped reading quite early) And finally, the charactere are rushed? (English is not my mother tongue so sometine, I lack vocabulary). A exemple, the MC get attached to it's first owner for no reason. Some people get introduced then leave without much impact... All in all, a good concept whitout major flaw but the minor ones get me off. If you're the type that continue don't unhook off easily at minor things, I'm sure you'll enjoy it.

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Thanks for the honest review. I think that my story has huge flaws in it. Even though you said there were just minor flaws. I wanted you to know that this was my first story and I was still kinda new on the writing stuff at that time.