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nice plot but author can't explain the story. can't build the background. Main character become side character due to lack of screentime in story. Also author jumps from one situation to other(story inside story) which is anything but annoying. let's forget about grammar here.

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Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

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Thanks for the honest review... This was my first book actually and I do know that I make a lot of mistakes in it. I really wish that I could redo it all but I just can't as I have already gone past the point that I couldn't undo it anymore. But I take this all as a lesson for my future book that I will publish.