Review Detail of Shadow_Magus in Reincarnated As The Hero Ring

The idea is pretty good, and time skips are normal and fine. However, some characters actions do not match with their role. Maybe try and link character background with their morals in you mind before using them. This would prevent such contradictions. Also, some random skips from first to third person and back, but nothing to serious. Overall a good novel. Keep up the good work author