Review Detail of q00u in Last Light in the Universe

Obligatory shameless-author 5-star review, as required. This is how I'm spending my vacation. _Should_ be a quick, short story. I have an ending in mind. Of course, most of this is by the seat of my pants, so who knows? But, I dislike stories that don't conclude, so reaching the final chapter is a priority for me. I hope someone enjoys reading it as much as I'm enjoying writing it.