Review Detail of FrightKnight88 in The Immortal Kobold
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I really liked how the story started the first 19 chapter were really good, the next 20 chapters were of him spending 2 years enslaved basically earning nothing, why around 20 chapter were needed for that I don't know, the next 20 chapters are of him being betrayed by a girl who wants to kill him, thinks him a monster but then loves him and only he is important to her, being enslaved ONCE AGAIN by a overpowered female cultivator who also reincarnated in her Dual Cultivation sect, and he continuously sees himself better than everyone and somehow is ridiculously overpowered even though he still hadn't evolved, then procedes to punch the dragon lady, Mistress and even though author makes her some vicious dragon she doesnt kill him for whatever reason even tho he continuously attacks her with his weak strength looking down on her. Literally this isn't convoluted at this point it's just a confusing and terrible plot put together with above average writing past the first 19 chapters. I personally am just becoming more enraged at the author the more I read because while it was incredibly realistic and awesome world building at first it gradually turned into a uncaring approach to writing the story, at chapter 54 only one person has commented. If you are looking for a story that will grab your heart, make you laugh, or turn you on this story isn't it, because nothing interesting happens. I'm half convinced the author is a arrogant person girl who takes forever to do things.
The Immortal Kobold
Darth_Xiane
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No problem. Not sure if I clarified it, most of the reason is because the motivations for characters don't really make sense, especially like mcsama who refuses to acknowledge anyone being above him and that he wants to enjoy life besides just cultivating but chooses every choice that gives him no freedom to do anything besides going to hermit and cultivate, and while I could handle the 2 years without progress just he like never levels anything, and his body cultivation that you constantly write about has no noticeable effect on the power level because it still makes him stronger than most mundane people but anyway slightly strong kicks his ass, like I understand why him getting his ass kicked is needed but that's basically all that happens to him once he was enslaved.
Darth_Xiane:Thanks for the review, sorry my tale didn't entertain you.
that is the reason i dropped at ch 108 , i couldnt get it anymore , first he act almighty then get his ass whiped then he free him self , repeating it two was ok but more time and i couldnt get it , reader but themslf in mc place and seeing not learning from his mistakes more than two time make him seems like a stupied.