As of reading so far it is very well written and easily understandable, while not being to simple. The updates seem to be coming in at a very stable rate. The story devolvement is so far is very interesting with no major flaws.it is a very unique choice to combine high fantasy and eastern fantasy into one, as I have only found one story like this ever. I am really enjoying the story so far. The characters are not that deep, this is to expected as the story just started, but each have a understandable personality which shows potential to develope into more. Lastly the world seems like a standard high fantasy world without any thing unique about it, but I expect that to change due to the changing of the world with his wish.
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