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Hentai_Senchou
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Trash pile. The ENTIRE story so far has been him power leveling himself and jumping to a new world. In the first world the only thing that happened is him training, beating japans number 5, then beating the champion, then training, then beating the world champion, then marrying shigure, then dying of old age. LITERALLY nothing happened between that and that's almost exactly how the author wrote it. It took like 10 chapters. Then the bnha world... He did the exact same thing and trained until the UA test, passed the test, skip to the villain attack, defeat the villains, then go on vacation and kill every villain in the world off screen. Just like above, those are the only things the author wrote about. Happened in 10 chapters with nothing in between. Not a single bit of plot or struggle has happened and now the author has to rely entirely on the one piece plot to keep him from making the mc jump to another world in 10 chapters. He's just using luffy as a ball and chain to slow the mc down. Not good at all... He trains the strawhats starting at the fish man island arc an all of them magically learned haki in one day. He's their babysitter now and the author cant deny it. He's as strong as the strongest yonko commanders and trains the strawhats and defeats anyone that comes close to their ship instead of fighting strong people and improving his martial arts like he claims he wants.

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kelpshake
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Yeah it wouldve been better imo if the mc was a normal dude who liked martial arts and got reborn in the first world (MHA) as a quirkless and started off from their. It’s too rushed and it feels like he will start baby sitting characters .

Hentai_Senchou
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He's already babysitting them... He has all of them training during the journey and anything that attacks the ship gets a flying sword slash from 300 feet away. That, or kenshin sinks the attacking ships by flicking pebbles at them in an attempt to look cool.

kelpshake:Yeah it wouldve been better imo if the mc was a normal dude who liked martial arts and got reborn in the first world (MHA) as a quirkless and started off from their. It’s too rushed and it feels like he will start baby sitting characters .