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So lets start of by saying I do enjoy the novel. But this does not mean its a good novel. First of I love the premise of your novel. You had me sold with only the Title & Synopsis so that's a big + But then after reading the first few chapters I already started to regret reading this, the MC acted like a wimpy 12 year old. To make a long story short he had no spine whatsoever and got walked over like a door mat. I already considered dropping the novel right then and there. Because I don't know about you guys but I can't be asked reading another beta CUCK MC. So I gave it a few more chapters and never stopped. I can't be asked writing a super long review so ill give you some bad points now. One of the biggest problems is that we barley get anything about the MC. Sure we get some SNU SNU chapters ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°) (which I obviously like) but that's about it. I feel like the author tried so hard to give the "disciples" some personality we get noting about the MC. And the further I get in the novel the less MC we get. I don't know about you guys but I don't read a novel to get 5+ chapters of no MC. This is a BIG deal breaker for me personally.So I read about 170 ish chapters in two days will catch up to the current chapters later today but I wanted to write the review right now because I'm upset at how the novel is going right now. We get so many chapters about the shittiest of the 10 disciples. First of all her character design is the worst one of the 10. For some reason she is running a whore house. (go figure)And we get so many chapters about this... (I don't care about this shitty part in the novel its so bad like for real bad)First off there is no logical reason for her to run the whore house.You might think there is but there is non as of now. - To make money for the sect? (NO if anything it probably costs more money then it makes) - To what save them? (NO if MC just killed them all (the owners) the problem would have been solved long ago) (if anything they are suffering more now because it gets dragged out so much) - To get intelligence "like a spy network" (NO, MC has his shadows) - To further her awful character design (NO, Just move on to another character, you could have developed the other ones in less chapters) - To help her cultivate? (Maybe, but I'm sure there was a better way) SO MY QUESTION IS WHY DO WE KEEP GETTING THESE SHITTY CHAPTERS??? Can we please move on like for real its so boring to read about this. Lets not forget MC is still only At 2/7 Spirit Lord Realm !!!!!!!!!!! 200 chapters in and MC is still SO WEAK!!!! LIKE ANY RANDOM DICK AND HARRY IMMORTAL CAN KILL HIM??? We need some development for MC!!!! So my problem is we get all these side adventures that do noting for the main story except add chapters when MC is still super UNDERDEVELOPED. I get that he wants to add more personalities to his disciples but he already did a really good job in 9 out of the 10 disciples. Its just that we keep getting these useless chapters where Lin Qingcheng is trying to run a whore house. That has no reason to even exist. And to make maters worse she is BRAIN DEAD. To give some perspective how weak MC is this is the cultivation we know: - Body Refinement Realm - Mind Focusing Realm - Spirit Initiate Realm - Spirit Lord 1/7 Spirit Lord Realm <-- MC STARTED HERE!!!! CHAPTER 1 2/7 Spirit Lord Realm <--- MC IS ONLY HERE AFTER 200 CHAPTERS! 3/7 Spirit Lord Realm 4/7 Spirit Lord Realm 5/7 Spirit Lord Realm 6/7 Spirit Lord Realm 7/7 Spirit Lord Realm - Spirit King 1/7 Spirit King 2/7 Spirit King 3/7 Spirit King 4/7 Spirit King 5/7 Spirit King 6/7 Spirit King 7/7 Spirit King - Spirit Emperor 1/7 Spirit Emperor 2/7 Spirit Emperor 3/7 Spirit Emperor 4/7 Spirit Emperor 5/7 Spirit Emperor 6/7 Spirit Emperor 7/7 Spirit Emperor - Spirit Overlord 1/7 Spirit Overlord 2/7 Spirit Overlord 3/7 Spirit Overlord 4/7 Spirit Overlord 5/7 Spirit Overlord 6/7 Spirit Overlord 7/7 Spirit Overlord - Spirit Master 1/7 Spirit Master 2/7 Spirit Master 3/7 Spirit Master 4/7 Spirit Master 5/7 Spirit Master 6/7 Spirit Master 7/7 Spirit Master - Spirit Saint 1/7 Spirit Saint 2/7 Spirit Saint 3/7 Spirit Saint 4/7 Spirit Saint 5/7 Spirit Saint 6/7 Spirit Saint 7/7 Spirit Saint - Spirit Demigod low? Demigod Med? Demigod High? Demigod we know noting yet about this realm Higher unknown realms ??? ??? ??? ??? ??? MC has never even looked for resources for himself!!! Like common give him some screen time and let him go on and adventure or two and let him level up a bit... Writing Quality ⭐⭐⭐⭐ Stability of Updates⭐⭐⭐ Story Development⭐⭐ Character Design⭐⭐⭐ World Background ⭐⭐ ⭐
Immortal Only Accepts Female Disciples
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So after catching up my point still stands! The whole PIMP thingy was 100% useless and a big Time & Chapter waste. Looking at how slowly the story is progressing this is and absolute waste to spend so many chapters on this useless plot-point. It accomplished noting plot wise and only frustrated the shit out of me. It was so hard to read those chapters that i knew where 100% useless and bad filler (I don't mind good filler but this was just horrible) the entire premise was so flawed and useless. The whole whore house / PIMPING plot point had no relevance in the story and is a waste of 30+ chapters. He could have found the tier thingy in 1000's of other ways that did not completely butcher Lin Qingcheng character. The golden madam thingy was 100% useless. I still don't get what it added to the story? If you think it added character growth all i can say is NO. All the other disciple have had good development but she is completely butchered now. She wanted to save them and ended up running a whore house.... She even let other girls get captured and she watched (the guys could have done noting to her. She was in no harm and could have easily saved that girl. But no she stood by and watched as it happened how is that character growth? Its unlike her to watch and do noting but she completely forgot about it and went to a party a week later the girl could have been ****ed by 1000's of guys by then (obviously did not happen but just saying) She wanted to save all the abused girls right? That's what this entire year long thingy was based on no? What did she do? Noting if she asked for help (would have given her character growth asking for help as first disciple) no of this would have happened and they could have saved all these girls way sooner and some would not have fallen victim. What we got is so many useless filler chapters of her trying to run a whore house that gave here absolutely no plus point. If it was for her cultivation author could have pulled it off that she ran in to her master getting it on with another disciple and it helped her in some way bla bla bla. (could have even turned into and orgie) (idk whatever floats your boat) But what we got is filler that was really bad and almost made me drop the novel
Wish I read this earlier before I wasted my time. What has made me drop is because one like you said there is no development for the mc. We never see him cultivate, don't know what he cultivates. Hell, he supposedly has all these secrets that could get him killed but you don't see any of them... Then he was looking for his second disciple and then out of fcking nowhere she just starts sucking him off??????????? Then she prob gets accepted to the sect, like WTF The only thing you need to do is suck off the mc and like a pathetic mc he is he will role over and give you everything he has.
House:So after catching up my point still stands! The whole PIMP thingy was 100% useless and a big Time & Chapter waste. Looking at how slowly the story is progressing this is and absolute waste to spend so many chapters on this useless plot-point. It accomplished noting plot wise and only frustrated the shit out of me. It was so hard to read those chapters that i knew where 100% useless and bad filler (I don't mind good filler but this was just horrible) the entire premise was so flawed and useless. The whole whore house / PIMPING plot point had no relevance in the story and is a waste of 30+ chapters. He could have found the tier thingy in 1000's of other ways that did not completely butcher Lin Qingcheng character. The golden madam thingy was 100% useless. I still don't get what it added to the story? If you think it added character growth all i can say is NO. All the other disciple have had good development but she is completely butchered now. She wanted to save them and ended up running a whore house.... She even let other girls get captured and she watched (the guys could have done noting to her. She was in no harm and could have easily saved that girl. But no she stood by and watched as it happened how is that character growth? Its unlike her to watch and do noting but she completely forgot about it and went to a party a week later the girl could have been ****ed by 1000's of guys by then (obviously did not happen but just saying) She wanted to save all the abused girls right? That's what this entire year long thingy was based on no? What did she do? Noting if she asked for help (would have given her character growth asking for help as first disciple) no of this would have happened and they could have saved all these girls way sooner and some would not have fallen victim. What we got is so many useless filler chapters of her trying to run a whore house that gave here absolutely no plus point. If it was for her cultivation author could have pulled it off that she ran in to her master getting it on with another disciple and it helped her in some way bla bla bla. (could have even turned into and orgie) (idk whatever floats your boat) But what we got is filler that was really bad and almost made me drop the novel