Review Detail of No_Name_desu in Mob devil's guide to surviving DxD

I'd say you seem to have not been paying attention or you seem to have forgotten an important aspect about devils in DxD. They can create Magic based on imagination. Any type of magic really. Issei has the ability to destroy clothing and talk to boobs. Fucking talk to boobs. And he created the first one within the week of him practicing with his demonic power. And he sucks at that So we started with one magic. Thought acceleration, that was the first magic that was created. Then from that branched off to memory partitioning., also known as parallel processing. And then from that memory archives. And in comparison to all the other various active attack based magic that all have visual effects, these ones are all stored in the head and therefore extremely easy to create and extremely low cost to maintain. And when I say cheats, I mean some bull**** illogical power that came from nowhere before he was born. Like having a longinus ot born with some God granting him cheats from another anime or something Anything else that he created after he was born is fair game. And since those three are the first abilities created, all other abilities become easy to create because he has both the time and processing power to do so

Gee!? So it's like pervy king's dress break and booblingual?? And rather than abilities, those three are magics?? Then I think it's better for you to deliver them more detailed than just popped them up in one paragraph. Like, write the process how he acquired them, told readers like me how he struggle, his tries and errors in the attempts to get them, because if you just popped them up like this, it give us assumption that it really easy to acquire... And because of the assumption, it make us wonder, if it that easy to acquire, then isn't that mean that many devils would have many variations of magic like this? In Issei case, from how Ishibumi delivered them, from the process how Issei acquired them, the end results of the spells acquired and how its works, we could assume that it was possible because Issei has rea~~~lly abnormal desires to boobs and lewd things as catalyst to create the spells. But I don't know about our MC because it just popped up in one paragraph of "magic" chapter. How he got them? Because it has effect to accelerate the thought, what the catalyst that it possible to create? Well, people had their own opinions and assumptions like how I had mine... Depend on the individual, this kind of detail could be ignored and it's good as it is... But for me, I think it really necessary because from how you delivered the story, from how MC reincarnated without GOD gifts, wishes, systems and other cheats like many mainstream stories, I could tell that you want to make the story as natural and as logical as possible. And the most notable is the "logic" part. Well, of course what I mean is DXD world's logic. If that's your intention, then the detailed process and his struggle is really necessary. The reasons are, first to maintain the logical elements that the story has. Second, to make readers like me doesn't have "easy to acquire" assumption and lead to an idea that if it is that easy, many devils -from low-class (because Issei also low class at first) to the highest-class- should have many varieties of abilities considering many of them should have also strong desire and intelligent. Not all devils have conditions like the boy in vol. 10 or like a certain rare case of Sairaorg, right? Many of them have fit and normal devil conditions after all. And third is because the spell would be MC's first capital to survive in DXD world, and because it's [Thought Acceleration], I think it would be essential spell for MC through the story. Like we know how he use the three of them to create something like system, right? That's why when he suddenly had amazing spells in one paragraph, it made me miss something from the story. The problem is how amazing the spells is. So amazing that the vibe it gave from the description of the spells and how it feels, it's like just another cheats in many mainstreams stories. It's one thing if we know the difficulties to acquire them, or at least how lucky he got them through some coincidences in the process... Well, it's just my opinion though....

damn very good argument man, are you an author yourself?i wish I have the same english and analytical skills like you