Review Detail of 0_Jordinio_0 in Mob devil's guide to surviving DxD

I got to chapter 3, but then I had to drop it. It's just kind of a mess. The writing in of itself while not as bad as most on here as far as grammar goes, is convoluted and reads like gibberish half the time. Not to mention you forgot to capitalise the first letter in a new sentences dozens upon dozens of times in each chapter. I've no idea how he randomly knew he was close to Rias, I couldn't make heads or tails of that gibberish. Honestly, not a good read at all. I'd recommend taking it down and giving it some thought before writing it again.