Review Detail of Arnold_11 in Mob devil's guide to surviving DxD

I think he's already doing it quite well, shameless part is unnecessary if he is making MC more realistic with the situation, specially with that mildly serious persona the author is giving him.

Yo. Names Bevis and I liked your story. I see your doing a re-write because you wanna change a few stuff from early on so I've got a recommendation for you. Keep 2-3 chapters finished and as a buffer to mess with before you post. This will give you time to add or revamp the story as your going. You are on the right path with just giving the MC high Devil status and no cheats. I'm kinda wondering what happened with Ingvild but I'm guessing that's for later.

Posted a comment but it fell under someone else's. Give it a look please.

You had a good start but now it's pretty clear that you dropped the story. Good luck and cya later.

I don't know why you choose as a servant though... or maybe servant. Haven't read it yet. But you'll get a hard time writing since there since it barely have any history on the side characters.

Question is it dropped as it has been three months? Also good novel.