Review Detail of amaturewriter in The Sun-Moon Spear God

Good story and grammar and plot.... Suggestion; OP MC..like level 60 by the time he is 11.., strong and smart..no retarded MC, no training others or some team ****-lone MC..one man army style [its cooler and plus its boring if MC requires others help]...romance and fluff [why not?]..keep it happy and fluff..no angsty tragic ****....add some bash [why not? we need someone to hate]