Review Detail of Darlene_Virginia in New World new worl new world

This is definitely a different story which is out of the world but literally, the country actually moved out to another world!!! The author has great imaginative skills. Just a slight suggestion though, I saw a few paragraphs which are too lengthy. If you could reduce it into small ones, it would look much better. It is just a suggestion, as always author knows the best! Happy writing!