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Not a bad story thus far albeit execution needs work. I will keep an eye out for this story to see how it will develop. Story does need a beta-reader however.

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LuxVonDeux
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Thank you, and for the reason I dont edit any of this is because I only write this fiction to fill my free time on my holiday. I usually will edit the format myself and use grammarly for my editor. As for the plot.... well I just write something that inside my mind, in my previous story I usually research the topic on Fandom Wiki but this time I only write the story according my knowledge. Anyway thank you for the review.